Open Poetry #27 |
Semper liberta |
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
My hand I hold to the harsh wind raising arm to sky palm open raindrops falling freely I smile and release from my palm the bird to flight |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
what an awsome image If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
& & errrrr whatever else!!! who luvs ya!? lol If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have done this countless times myself! Literally and figuratively! (Mind you, there was not a literal bird!) EA |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,,, A voice of honesty |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
may i be the bird you caress and feel your healing touch? i will thereafter love you eternally if but for a moment to fly as such |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Reminds me of course, of Noah--releasing the dove. (If you get a chance to watch the movie again, during this particular scene, I SWEAR it sounds like the actor (I forget who) says, "Go FOR IT." chuckle. (He said "Go FORTH" of course.) Either way Sue? It's good advice. |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
thats really beautiful... cheers mate... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - and slowly what's inside is being released... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...*BEAUTIFUL!!*... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you James Thanks Eric Glad to have provided it Liz thank you you do? lol Kris - thank you EA - LMAO - it is a powerful image indeed you have left for me now thank you Thanks Q! Michele: This is such a beautiful response . . . seems as if a write in the making in itself . . . thank you Karen: thank you - funny . . I love Noahs Ark too how did you know that? *wink* cheers back atchya nobody thank you Bill: I sure hope so - took one too many wrong flights . . . thank you Nancy: thank you so very sweet Thanks guys Will see you soon xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Sue, HE made me fly, that is why........ (if only for a moment) [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-12-2003 03:13 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
fleeting indeed and for that I must be grateful - thanks Michele xxoo |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...I'm liking this one...makes me smile. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
heh this is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for the read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
.... and your little wings spread and soar high .... to raise our arms towards the sky is one of the most beautiful gestures ... we point to the Source. Beautiful poem ... releasing peace. Hugs and love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Bernie! Thank you Vicki - glad I could make you smile Your welcome Sky - thank you Thank you Margherita . . . yes indeed and during the rain . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Sue. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Sue xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the vision of you...painless the vision of me too..one day beautiful, damn beautiful |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
to release, during such turbulant times, it must have been its time to fly fly on... its your time!!! |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
Oh I love this! Freeing, refreshing and very pleasant for the mind. Wonderful. ~DW~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Dix - I can dream - we both can LOL it will come indeed Thanks Mike - yes indeed time to fly *flappin wings . . .* trying to LOL thank you Hey D - very cool - thank you yes need refreshment indeed Thanks guys xxoo |
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