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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Cipher what is this sudden sickening that grabs the very gut of me and twists it - pretzelesque, it seems - to leave me seeking comforting in something that I must have lost but unaware I ever had where now exists an emptiness in hungering for sustenance I pray the gods will quick console untie the knot, release the hold decipher meaning - break the code and set the sorrow free ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Always read your stuff, and am speechless. This is one for the library. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
break the code and set the sorrow free i really liked these lines,, fabulous write n read.... A voice of honesty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Vicky dear, it was a pleasure to see your wonderful poetry on this short moment I leaped into the blue pages. As always a beauty Hugs and knuffels coming your way. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
my library too dear Vicky. hugs to you.  |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Sharp on my eyes. Great write... Keep on keepin' on. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...Sorrow hurts and is so much a part of life..It comes from loving, and I guess is necessary, as loving is.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, I love this description here, though I'm sorry that you felt this way.... what is this sudden sickening that grabs the very gut of me and twists it - pretzelesque, it seems - I could almost feel that in my stomach.  Hugs to you, lady Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
 A voice of honesty |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
OOH YEAH!! Good good stuff...!!! Only had a second, but couldn't resist a read.... nite nite you poet-y woman you! keep "write" on, eh! love ya, g |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pretzelesque, it seems - to leave me seeking comforting in something that I must have lost but unaware I ever had where now exists an emptiness yes, you've spoken of that aching well...... |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
How can you take something so GROSS and write it so beautifully? lol Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yep! one can feel this write in the reading. Ed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
pretzelesque ============== clever clever..the "twisting" of the word and its poetic meaning with in the poem.. very cool Vicky-girl... powerful writing here...so good to see your muse is back with you and you with us.  "I'm good at two things and this is the other one." |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I pray that your prayer is ciphered and granted. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, enjoyed the feelings |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oooh that was a punch in the gut... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMyFriend~ 'pretzelesque' Attsa' me !! Love this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
A very enjoyable cypher. Enjoyed very much. |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
i felt that way for a long time...i guess that is why i started writing poetry...I feel your pain deeply, sometimes it helps to cry, sometimes it help to listen to Sinatra...but in the end the thing that helps me is just pouring emotions into words...from your work, you pain comes through so raw its beautifull ... i admire you ability to be soberly vulnerable and honest... Mike _____________________________ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vlraynes - one day when you awake it will not be there... My best is yours... BC |
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