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The betrayal..
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The betrayal.. |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
hey i wrote this...and i wrote a poem on the theme i don't think i covered it very well but please post your opinions...thanks.. "you're not worth my time" the door slams,and she is left in a crumpled heap on the floor. the thoughts of what the one and only person she has ever loved spin around in her head,and she no longer feels the need to live.she blames herself and herself only,his constant affairs playin no part in this crime.yet,the sunlight comes through the window and plays a part in the miracle of life.her life,and her own life. she must fight and learn to fight on her own. her love has gone,and will never be retrieved,and all from this one betrayal. the betrayal of a lifetime. The betrayal "you're not woth my time" lying deciet crumpled on the floor words haunting her head never leaving thoughts left untold pain hurt anger all gone gone in... the last betryal no love no life no will to live sunlight shining a chance, at happiness pleading wanting needing the only love learning to fight to live to lose the things she holds dear the only things the only people happiness nevercoming her way the one thing she hates hates with all might the imperfection the sadness will be gone and she.. will no longer live live in her pain |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great write.  |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
cheers me dear.......   |
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