Open Poetry #27 |
MISERY'S MOON |
RavenEye Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29Ohio, USA |
On the crest of misery's moon awaits today's mourning. Solitude's anxious anger is illuminated by a harvest glow. Shades and shadows hide profound sorrows of yesterday's tomorrow as wicked winds carry them to unknonwn destinations. On the ridge of ocean's ebb, breathes and dies the essence of all life. In frantic fury waves dance, clash, crash and thrash, only to fade into the watery abyss. Waiitng in isolation at the edge of dawn, is the rising of a new day ready to be born. Only to be betrayed by the harsh arrival of another evening stalking in to steal yet another birth of yet another day. Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
made me feel kinda sad...good write |
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RavenEye Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29Ohio, USA |
Hello, I am sorry it made you feel a little sad. Thanks so much for writing and commenting on my poem. It means a great deal to hear from others!! RavenEye Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this, Lisa. Sorry I missed it the day it was posted! This stands out in my mind: Shades and shadows hide profound sorrows of yesterday's tomorrow as wicked winds carry them to unknown destinations |
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RavenEye Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29Ohio, USA |
Hi Midnitesun, I am so pleased you liked my poem!! That's okay you missed it the day it was posted. I appreciate you taking the time to commenton it now. My best to you!! ~Lisa~ Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really enjoyed your poem! Wonderful write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, you are certainly a welcome new addition to our poetic family! This poem was deliciously descriptive--and very poetic! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and appreciate your talent! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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RavenEye Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29Ohio, USA |
Hi Munda, Thank you so much!! I am so happy you liked my poem!! ~Lisa~ Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals! |
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RavenEye Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29Ohio, USA |
Hi Earth Angel, WOW!! Thank you for your wonderful comments and warm welcome!! I deeply appreciate it!! ~Lisa~ Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals! |
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