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Lost measurements |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Splash me over your favourite record ruin your melody, jump when i repeat Bathe the scratch when you itch for me how i love you, despite the demise Sign the thousandth call for recognition envelopes wasted, prices paid Prize me from the prize so furious see me better, fall promises quicker Oh this is you, this was never me still i stretched and turned to fit you without measuring up. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you don't sound like a broken record  Thought I'd say something nice before the purple mokey comes and starts pretending to be British  You are awsome. (we don't have an evil plan, don't worry  )If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Fantastic! |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
 wow. Wonderufl poem. I have written a few poems in this forum. I hope to read more of your work. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Splash me over your favourite record ruin your melody, jump when i repeat" Oh mannnnnnnn, dear Lady, what an opening ... just fabulous. Enjoyed...the whole thing, too, by the way. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hahahaha!!!! I love this, Gemma!! LOL  Especially this one...Bathe the scratch when you itch for me how i love you, despite the demise Ha!!! You tell him girlie.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in awe...relating |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is a very clever write--but then again, ALL your writes are clever!  Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem: Lady - you have been reading my mind wayy too much here this evening/day/evening still i stretched and turned to fit you without measuring up. Why . . . xxoo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I applaud any reference to vinyl.  and yes, I too could relate to this: "Oh this is you, this was never me still i stretched and turned to fit you without measuring up." Excellent, gemma! |
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