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Open Poetry #27

I've got it.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-10 09:07 PM

I've got it,
just a clue as you
slip into sleep.
A little thought
for you to keep.

My whispers
weep
your name..

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-07-10 09:14 PM

"My whispers weep your name"---great line!

Warm hugs,
EA

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

2 posted 2003-07-10 09:18 PM

Very nicely said especially the last line.

Anwaar

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2003-07-10 09:21 PM

Just awesome!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-07-10 11:20 PM

WOW ... that last line was a show stopper.

Gorgious close for a poem.

Enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-11 02:33 AM

good stuff!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-07-11 11:40 AM

good thoughts

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-07-11 11:43 AM

beautiful poetry - it ends perfectly - Paul

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-07-11 04:37 PM

Kaoru - deep thoughts written...

BC

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