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Open Poetry #27

chances

Bonfirelight
Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 85
London, England

0 posted 2003-07-10 10:46 AM

tug of war
with a kitchen knife
having lost the call
the winner picks ends

passed over by a god
who'd grant a view of the city
turned down and around
again and again

fickle fate's bony finger
led the cold hand
to the angels shoulder
where will learned to stand

We will stand again
one last time
no more to win
just to prove you can

[This message has been edited by Bonfirelight (07-10-2003 11:02 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-10 12:00 PM

count me in! enjoyed!

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

2 posted 2003-07-10 12:05 PM

"No more to win
just to prove you can"

I love it.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-07-10 12:25 PM

fickle fate's bony finger

brilliant description.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

4 posted 2003-09-20 11:55 AM

wow...now that's what i like to see. fantastic. finally, someone with real
t-a-l-e-n-t. :Þ you rock.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

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