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Life? |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Life? So meaningless Out of place Missing? Empty shells Walking on This God forsaken Plain of existents Souls searching The wastelands For signs Signs of love That will allow Rejoining Of the two As one A whispered longing To be set free From all this Hurt and misery Desiring the need Of blood Running through There souls Bringing life To their hearts Causing them To breathe Life into this world again |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Why hasnt anyone replied isnt it good enough for anyone? my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I write out of a need to put down my words.If other people like my words it is fine with me.If not then perhaps they do not see as I see.Do not stop writing.It is sometimes difficult to make a connection. paladin |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Hi Redstone, Keep on writing and people will notice...I stopped writing once because a teacher said what I wrote was not good enough...It took me 17 years to start writing again...Hope you don't make the same mistake that I did... Your poem is very powerful and expresses deep sorrow... Anwaar |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I just signed on to this site for today but this is EVERY BIT worth the read! Excellent, excellent write here! I mean that!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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