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Last Night
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Last Night |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Yawn my memory dusted - I am but yesterday and last night. I hold only the definition of past. Tense, my muscles lock I stress and compress my feelings.. You blow me away like salt on the table.. Throw me over your shoulder. Why do the words cut so deep? Oh, my feelings are incomplete. If I have to tell you this backwards, I will. But yesterday, I am. And last night. |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
 Fanstic job. It is well written. It made me want to cry.  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is really great - evokes lots of feelings and thoughts - very well done - Paul |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beyond words... incredible! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sigh* I should send this to my friend...that tosses me over his shoulder like salt... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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