Open Poetry #27 |
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Broken stars |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC ![]() |
The breaking of twinkling stars The crashing of the tides of time The falling of the sun and moon couldn't hush the pain away. No rock-a-byes No nursery rhymes No cotton candy No carnival rides could keep the pain away. Only twisting heart and bleeding soul Her gut-wrenched cries could help them subside. The sands of time washed through the glass Before her heart had healed at last. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I dont see why this has no replies..haunting... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so wonderfully written, but so full of sadness ... The sands of time washed through the glass Before her heart had healed at last. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
This is a very sad poem...and very well written...If this refers to your personal experience I am sorry and hope you will find comfort and peace soon. Anwaar |
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