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Man cannot live without water ( Ethel's Half Full Challenge )
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Man cannot live without water ( Ethel's Half Full Challenge ) |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Empty when you put me down no room in your glass for me cigarettes and alcohol quench your lazy thirst. Full when I realise I can be the water for someone some day that they cannot live without. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
yep, I deplore laziness. Haha, great poem Gumdrop, acctualy, I haven't read a poem by you that I haven't liked yet. And I won't tell them about how you "accidentaly" put it in the challenge thingie either. Oops, mustve slipped out somehow  I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thanks Liz. no wait... you told.  I'm an idiot. i blushed when i did it. no point, no one saw me. i went in again to read exactly what the challenge was and forgot to go into open. duh. i blame it on sunstroke. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma? you are the water . . . either way you look at the glass I do not see how anyone could possibly live without you and if they do then they are truly thirsting . . . Not you I loved how you presented this amazing . . . God brilliant gem xxoo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Gemma  Lookey here what I found!!!!  You met the challenge excellently and I thank you!! This part is oh so true, sweet Gemma... Full when I realise I can be the water for someone some day that they cannot live without. Ya know what? That "other" guy must be crazy, not to realize what he's letting get away. Doesn't he know that he truly had a "gem" in you? Send him that poem I wrote for you and he'll how much we think of you, little lady.  Hugs to you my friend  Ethel Mae |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
the water for someone some day that they cannot live without. I absolutely love this line my friend! Bravo!!!  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
How'd this get on the last page with only 4 replys? hey, it happens, but not to my psychicly connected friend. So Idecided to bump it. Heh, like this Bump! This message was brought to you by the penut gallery and the guy who pretends to be British If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No room in his glass for you?!?--Well I do believe he may deserve a kick in the cigarette butt!   EA |
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