Open Poetry #27 |
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Teach Me (ten or less) |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
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love is blind teach me your soft braille [This message has been edited by Ratleader (07-09-2003 12:42 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...I like this...it's all in the fingertips, ya know? |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
What a beautiful thought! ![]() quatro |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is sounding better by the minute..... ...I'm thinking it's a totally encompassing tactile experience....but fingertips, yeah, that's a good starting place. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And kids say school is boring... they just don't know how much fun some learning can be! *G* I like this very much, sir... so much said in a few perfectly chosen words. *S* |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great lines...forming a great poem. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn.... This is beautiful!! ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Perfectly said...in few words. Jason |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was v-e-r-y good! Yes, indeed it was! Warm hugs and smiles, EA |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
. . . . . . . . it was good for me too. . . . . . . ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
thats cool man. Succinct and cool |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oh how'd you think these things up Ed? Love how your mind works. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh wow! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed: this is perfection . . . xxoo |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
... and let your fingers do the talking. Yep, works for me. Enjoyed |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is a "Perfect 10" or less ! Patricia |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
Great job. Keep on writting. |
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