Open Poetry #27 |
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Morning Aura |
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Shadows of Time Junior Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 14 |
A crack of light breaks through Washing away the darkness in a surge The world is revealed as I gaze through clouded eyes I roll over, seeing you lying there next to me I wrap my arms around you, embrace you Pull you close But you dissolve, slipping through my fingers With a sigh I roll back into the darkness And slip back into my dreamless slumber And wait to see you for real |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwwww....this is so touching.... ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But you dissolve, slipping through my fingers With a sigh I roll back into the darkness And slip back into my dreamless slumber And wait to see you for real I know this... and you've written it so well. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have known of such a morning aura back in the shadows of time... Beautiful write. Warm hugs, EA |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AWWW, this is so beautiful. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nicely done! I could feel that moment |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice...I can picture me doing the same thing |
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