Open Poetry #27 |
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Waiting for your call |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
I wait for your call day and night Looking at the clock Slowly, anticipating Your sweet voice So I dream when my Phone doesn’t ring, of nights Suddenly forgotten Our life distant in my present I scream nightmares Calling me deep Stuck hopelessly Feeling forgotten She once rubbed my head And whispered in my ear Marry me But now alone I see My passions folly Has left me wanting So I stay stuck Like unread pages Counting the minutes But then dreaming again Your hand in mine The wind blows Me kisses suddenly Close, cupids point Piercing my sleep Fooling me So I sit now The night before We talk, hoping Waiting Tirelessly For the dream That never comes As frost said The sweet pang It cost me not to call I stay vivid in my memory Of our life u think too small Devoid of aspiration With no faith in me I live constantly In a state of oblivion I want to read this poem To you while you sleep So you can hear me speak And not listen |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, that's quite an ending there and what would you do if she did hear, and listen? BTW, welcome to Passions, bigmike. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
x8x_bigmike - how well these thoughts are known, to speak and not to listen of one. Never could figure it out... BC |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You 'n icebox aren't waiting for each other tonight, are you? /pip/Forum80/HTML/002256.html ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
the speak and not listen...its like...scared to be vulnerable about how i feel...and secondly not wanting to hurt her...even though she has hurt me deeply...im not sure why i feel like that...im still missing her i guess... |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Oh my gosh! I loved this! Especially your ending. Thanks for sharing. quatro |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
lol dont think so...but i think he has some years on me...looks like we relate on some level... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great ending! Welcome to Passions! |
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