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Open Poetry #27

Only The Question Is Eternal

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-07-07 11:39 PM

Hear, "I do." "I do."

Say, "unto death do us part."

Success means one died?

©2003 by icebox

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-07-08 12:05 PM

and one lived...Brilliant.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-08 12:15 PM

Youre always in my head..scary place to be. I just had this discussion yesterday with some friends. marriage..phblllllllt

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-07-08 05:54 AM

I think so...james

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-07-08 07:23 AM

I believe that the success is in the fact that they were content to stay till death did the parting.

Clever write and twist poet sir

Well ... OK ... but you have to wash it first.

(bumper sticker humor) ;)

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-07-08 10:58 AM

icebox...that's why I didn't have those words in my ceremony, and substituded, forever.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2003-07-08 12:15 PM

But the beauty is that one survived with the memories to find the answers. Ah, but I only have a jar on my mantle with ashes of past husbands

Like the others you seem to always be in my mind these days with your wit and knowledge. I am so glad you started to post here.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2003-07-08 12:47 PM

Success in failure?
Something died along the way
both were heard to say.

s.a.g.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-07-08 12:53 PM

Clever write! --and I like Martie's "forever" substition--but, then again, that is a veeeeeeeery looooooong time! LOL

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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