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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-06 02:35 AM

Ebb

my heart beats
         in tones
                 inaudible
                        to most
                     if you
                can hear it
           its melody
       is the song
of the tide
       out it goes
              and plays
                     gently ebbing
                  in search
             riding back
           to shore
with liquid
        fingers exploring
               creeping closer
                     and closer
                   singing come
              catch me
       come catch me
on the edge

"if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-06 02:39 AM

this reminds me of how we used to go along the beach and pick up those big conch shells and listen in them

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-07-06 08:14 AM

Wonder imagery here, Helen - both visual and verbal...

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

3 posted 2003-07-06 12:24 PM

you tease the shore m'lady -- this one crests and breaks like a woman's heart -- but has the power to rearrange the world

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2003-07-06 12:25 PM

This is a beauty helen.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-07-06 03:44 PM

sighs

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2003-07-06 04:04 PM

Helen, this is beautiful, the style, the flow, the message. This is a keeper~

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-07-06 04:06 PM

wow, I loved the poem, and the style it was writen in- like crashing waves

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

8 posted 2003-07-08 12:31 PM

I like where you've been,
when you come back with a poem.

This is very nice.

s.a.g.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-07-08 12:57 PM

Every aspect of this post was delightful!

Warm smile and a hug,
EA

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