I don't like to fight-senryu

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Open Poetry #27

I don't like to fight-senryu

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-07 09:59 PM

I don't like to fight
but push me against a wall
and feel my fury

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-07-07 10:06 PM

im a lover, not a fighter, but watch my claws come out if you make me do it......yes, i relate

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2003-07-07 10:19 PM

I'm with inkedgoddess...I relate and deem this a keeper. Well said.

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-07-07 10:27 PM

Sounds so human to me!
Well done. TD

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-07-08 12:48 PM

BRAVO!!!
very very cool right-on write

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-07-08 03:03 AM

YESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee Jason . . .

God, me too
xxoo

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

6 posted 2003-07-08 07:58 AM

I'm not familiar with the Martial Art Senryu...I studied Isshinryu for several years and hapkido though?...And I used to love to fight....then got old, started feeling the punches, and decided it was time to just write poetry...

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