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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-07 06:47 AM



The waking hours
boxed

you took
too many days
to arrive

how quickly you gave up

that hurts most

when you sang

"we can work it out"

I believed

still
that was before
your change of sense

back to the fourteen year old
in love with himself

I owed you nothing
I gave you the chance you so wanted

Always loved me through the years?

ha

love never gives up.

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-07-07 07:15 AM


Girl, so true, so true...
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-07-07 07:44 AM


Love never has too.
Beautiful words...beautiful feelings Gem.
Your words always touch me.
Eric

brian sites
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3 posted 2003-07-07 08:33 AM


back to the fourteen year old
in love with himself

uh
(sqeaky voiced)
hi!

smile
this is sharp Gem
very nice

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-07-07 08:38 AM


love never gives up.

This really got me thinking about someone in my own life.  Hmmm.  I think I will go back for another read of this one.

Patricia

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-07-07 09:13 AM


You're right true love never does..hugs
gemjop
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6 posted 2003-07-07 09:19 AM


Thanks for stopping by everyone, it means much.

some people would do everything they could for someone they love, others are so consumed with themselves they could not possibly know how to love completely. I see it now, at least.

Wind
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7 posted 2003-07-07 09:46 AM


you're brilliant gem.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-07-07 08:46 PM


gem: OK you did it this time

Always loved me through the years?

ha


yea . . .
I know
xxoo

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-07-07 08:55 PM


love never gives up


Sweet little Gemma, you're so right and, this response of yours to your replies...

some people would do everything they could for someone they love, others are so consumed with themselves they could not possibly know how to love completely.

Says it all...this is what true love  means.

Bless you, child....things will get better.           


"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." ~Gary~  Heart hugs, Ethel Mae

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-07-2003 08:56 PM).]

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10 posted 2003-07-08 09:55 AM


What's a gemjop jewel doing down here with nine replies??? Back to the top with it!

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gemjop
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11 posted 2003-07-08 11:06 AM


thanks ya little sweethearts...your words make me feel better y know? so thanks.
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