Open Poetry #27 |
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Third time unlucky |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA ![]() |
The waking hours boxed you took too many days to arrive how quickly you gave up that hurts most when you sang "we can work it out" I believed still that was before your change of sense back to the fourteen year old in love with himself I owed you nothing I gave you the chance you so wanted Always loved me through the years? ha love never gives up. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Girl, so true, so true... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Love never has too. Beautiful words...beautiful feelings Gem. Your words always touch me. Eric |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
back to the fourteen year old in love with himself uh (sqeaky voiced) hi! smile this is sharp Gem very nice |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
love never gives up. This really got me thinking about someone in my own life. Hmmm. I think I will go back for another read of this one. Patricia |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You're right true love never does..hugs |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thanks for stopping by everyone, it means much. ![]() some people would do everything they could for someone they love, others are so consumed with themselves they could not possibly know how to love completely. I see it now, at least. |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you're brilliant gem. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem: OK you did it this time Always loved me through the years? ha yea . . . I know xxoo |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
love never gives up Sweet little Gemma, you're so right and, this response of yours to your replies... some people would do everything they could for someone they love, others are so consumed with themselves they could not possibly know how to love completely. Says it all...this is what true love means. Bless you, child....things will get better. ![]() ![]() ![]() "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room in my mind & slam the door on it." ~Gary~ Heart hugs, Ethel Mae [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-07-2003 08:56 PM).] |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What's a gemjop jewel doing down here with nine replies??? Back to the top with it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thanks ya little sweethearts...your words make me feel better y know? so thanks. ![]() |
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