nobody's fault but mine (inspired by wranx and Led Zeppelin, et al.)

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-07-07 05:37 PM

Now I claim the ownership.
This baton should not be passed.
Watch me eat the fire now,
praying for an end that lasts.

Stubbing cigs and tossing drinks--
the mirror is a splashboard vine.
Drunken monkey at the dance--
nobody's fault but mine.

The train is rolling down the tracks--
and there are no brakes.
Drive on little sista, laugh--
then weep to me how the crash aches.

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http://www.lyricattack.com/l/ledzeppelinlyrics/nobodysfaultbutminelyrics.html

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-07-07 05:49 PM

claiming ownership...wish everyone would do that

hugss
M

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-07-07 05:58 PM

a very intense write...I don't know why things happen, they just do...but it is no one's fault...perhaps it's something we just need to go through, to move us forward in the right direction, for from the greatest of losses sometimes comes the greatest of men...God bless

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-07-07 06:27 PM

and you call yourself serenity (into irony, huh?) you have such style

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

4 posted 2003-07-07 08:16 PM

K: I must admit I was afraid to click this on seeing as it was inspired by Wranx AND Zep LOL . . .

but crash and burn . . .
God my sisters and I
used to say that all the time

tis true indeed
xxoo

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-07-07 09:49 PM

I bow and acknowledge, great Karen.great inspiration!

Jason

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

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6 posted 2003-07-07 10:08 PM

Well, I was drawn in by all three names. LZ is my favorite all time...nothing says it better than a few choice soul screams by Robert Plant. Seriously, Serenity, I do remember those teenage days surprisingly well. I often wonder now how I survived. I keep saying there must be a reason.

Excellent write

Patricia

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-07-07 10:23 PM

Some of Bonham's greatest work in that one..this packs the same punch as that k..awesome oh and k

nenenenenenenenenene-nobody's fault but miiiiiine..
that part always makes me laugh

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-07-2003 10:29 PM).]

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2003-07-07 11:13 PM

Ok, so exactly how does wranx figger into this? I see the Zeppelin connection, but...?

No, I think karenity has also been listening to too much "old" rock and roll.

~yeti

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2003-07-07 11:17 PM

So says the guy who had the Stones "a-musing" him?

grin...

(twas the style of yer last poem yeti...

)

and, I guess I've made it through another day.

Somebody open the champagne, I'm so tweaked.