Open Poetry #27 |
Storm Watch |
abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
a smudged out moon glows in hazy opalescence where it should hang brightly glowing in an indigo sky now turned a blackened gray by vaprorized moisture hanging wet blanket heavy from the horizon i look for a silver gash to break the somber night of a promise of inheld fury in clouds invisible in the dark and listen for the growl of distant rumblings to announce fury breaking through the distilled quiet but nothing flashes but a simple twinkle from an insect lighting its way as it gambles through the pregnant night i wait for release of tears from a depressed atmosphere to break in relief upon my roof i wait until night breaks into a gray morning sky shrouding the world in a promise given but not yet kept and the storm watch is not lifted with the new day as a bird song attacks the silent air i wait and watch |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful write full of fantastic imagery. Very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yup....what my sister Enchantress said. hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wonderful imagery in this ominous, dark, foreboding |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
thanks all. i really do appreciate your positive comments. it's been a while since i had taken time to post anything and it felt good to get something out again... it felt even better to read your kind words. oh... that waiting storm broke late yesterday in a waterfall downpour which left a river flowing down the sidewalk. it was quite awesome. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, vivid images... I was holding my breath. *S* Excellent work! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loved storm watching with you! Wonderful writing! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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