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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Only for the lost cat on the block? only for the return on gained stock? it's redeemed when a foreign student has spoken where more than a single cultural barrier has been broken. I mean... not broken like a bottle of wine or a broken wish, now fruitless,out of line but a hurdle over the barrier of the spoken word where there are often more subtler means to be heard A gesture of good will can n'er be overlooked a common courtesy that comforts the crooked makes them forget when it's time for new words to be used an innate acquisition of associated customs should be perused herald the new means of creation..brighter purpose for your words most often there are subtler means that scratch to be heard. sounds garner the palate of your mouth..and form that speech that looks towards an inevitable cultural barrier to breech [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-06-2003 11:45 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
more subtler ways indeed . . . nice job Martin xxoo |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Please continue, dear voice.. as always, you make me think.. sometimes that's painful.. but it is usually productive  Pepper |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is great...full of wonder and beauty. Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
hey guys and girls, pleasure the insight is all appreciated..it comes from teaching oriental students whose eyes glimmer when they understand..and that is a language in itself |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Well done, enjoyed. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks Sy for clicking in added a more appropriate ending |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You truly do write about the most amazing things. you have a wonderful mind. you never fail to write about the important things, that are often overlooked. keep em coming kind sir.  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Gem Can see though that having posted these thoughts on line it would be beneficial for others to think more objectively when writing a poem just on themselves, not that poems on oneself are not beneficial...they are I think a way of exonerating ourselves from the human dilemma at times...I mean I have no patent on a million and one ideas there are out there an there is SO many more ideas for every poet to tap...keep tuned in  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-06-2003 11:16 PM).] |
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