Open Poetry #27 |
Habit |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Daily smoke flesh fills out the mirror where something once was. The rocks you roll are laughable smoke dreams strumming the words you think you understand. Inhale you now i spit you out wishing I could lie about the good times. I breathe a different air to you though stale and alike mine keeps me concious. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop, LOL enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Inhale you now i spit you out wishing I could lie about the good times. I breathe a different air to you though stale and alike mine keeps me concious. Hi Gemma Little friend.......... Loveya, little Lady Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Bout time you got back |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"wishing I could lie about the good times" sigh |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
... touche' ... Enjoyed this witty piece. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ahaha... you allways tell me off for disappearing...and now you're doing it. Grr.. and you didn't even say hello. I missed ya honey, was an awsome poem I'd break a mirror, and see that your face, was still there, glass shattered, bones shattered, it makes no difference, when you're gone I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Deep breath, that's right breathe baby breathe~ Hugs gemma~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem . . you know there are way too many lines I identify with in this write . . . as a matter of fact I wish it had come from my own pen brilliant gem and like to see you like this and also know how hard those memories take a toll on the heart . . . xxoo |
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