Open Poetry #27 |
Dream Angel |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
The raging tides crash against my soul Grazing the heart I hold within As the fierce storms break out inside It slowly drowns me with fear Darkness surrounds me from all around Covering me with loneliness Spreading inside and out I cry to the gods Open me up inside and heal my wounds! As I look into the darkness Light appears overhead I see an angel before my eyes Her wings of love holding her tight As she calls for me to step into the light I move forth and she holds out her hand And a blinding white light covers my path I open my eyes to find that shes gone Was it my dream that brought her along? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ You are such a welcomed heart to this circle~ Thank you for being a poet and for sharing with us~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. This reminds me of something Liam would write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
thank you all that took the time to read my work and to enjoy every word of it thanks again my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, a beautiful write |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Angels. Yes. And not simply in our dreams. Thank you for taking a moment to share yours. Bob |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As I look into the darkness Light appears overhead I see an angel before my eyes Her wings of love holding her tight As she calls for me to step into the light Lee, this is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing your dreams with us. Hugs Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how beautiful! and...so very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe in angels...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was a lovely piece of writing. May your dream be reflected in reality! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was a beautiful poem, fantasy or reality? Is your love real or fake? beautiful, descriptive poetry! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Its good to let loose some feelings! ARCTIC WIND |
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