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Open Poetry #27

Lets Take a Walk

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-30 04:05 PM

Lets Take a walk

As we walk along we see a
spotted fawn chasing the
butterflies

a lone eagle is drifting above

as bunnies scamper to hide
in the meadows so lush

birds singing in the trees and
honeybees buzzing gathering
nectar from wildflowers

many of these things i see
reminds me of you darling
of when we met

you were cute like the fawn
and had butterflies

like the eagle your eyes had
seen much and was lonely

and you were scampering to
hide like a bunny

and your heart was not lush
with love

but now your singing like the
birds and giving kisses of
sweet nectar not gathered from
wildflowers but from your heart

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-30 04:22 PM

Enjoyed this alot. Great write!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-30 04:48 PM

Nice one Glenn, surprised to see a rather
long (by your standards you have set) poem
from you (grins)....

You put the pieces in all the right places!

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-06-30 05:31 PM

SOooo romantic!

Very touching write!
I enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-07-01 12:26 PM

thank you all for your Replies

[This message has been edited by QjQ (07-01-2003 01:53 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-01 02:01 PM

ah...love the romantic in you

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-08-26 01:11 AM

Ah so very nice.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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