Open Poetry #27 |
be spawned again (for a friend who needed this) |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
breathe keep breathing fill your chest with proud air feel great about yourself for your self is special live like you enjoy to allow the flame to burn believe keep believing that somewhere in this world there is a flickering light shining bright like a beacon just for you stand keep standing tall on your feet for no one can pull you down except you in an depressed desire of touching your shadow let darkness be lay down the ghosts to rest let your dreams speak while your eyes twinkle let newfound joy spread ~spread with smiles and you shall find yourself spawned again bathed in sunshine dressed in yellow --- one of my friends needed some words of support and I scribbled most of this on the back cover of a magazine that showed the scene of a sunrise... just wanted to share thanks [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (06-30-2003 05:01 AM).] |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
and you shall find yourself spawned again bathed in sunshine dressed in yellow ===================== ===================== nice. love the last part. peace. www.heybroproductions.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
let newfound joy spread ~spread with smiles These lines made me smile. *S* I like this, Sudhir... hope it helps your friend. *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir: There is no doubt your friend is lucky indeed to have you and by you posting this you have given a gift to all of us xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautifully written hug always, you find a way to convey a truth, gently |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Here are your marching orders: Carry a magazine and a pen everywhere you go....let nothing escape! I know this feeling of having to capture a poem any way you can, because I recently captured two poems with a blue crayon, on a restaurant's cartoon menu for children -- (A New Blonde Waitress and Balloon Hat, what else?)...... Each poem you post here impresses me in new ways. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
I wish I thought yellow was my color. enjoyed this. A very positive message I think I needed. "You put a stain on all of my good days." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if I am not "the" friend...at least I am "a" friend |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I needed this, yes |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, my dear friends... and sometimes I am my friend too and I need some words too regards, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's good to write for you too, yes...glad you share with us |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks Dixie regards sudhir |
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