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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium 
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When is it time to close the door behind and say adieu to all what's in my past the bad, the hounts, the devils of my mind As well as happy tales by fairies cast Where lies the bound of pain a love can cause When does one know the fight is to be lost Though fights are one of loves very own laws the ache they bring has its own hurting cost The qualities of love I struggle with the how and why the heart feels severe tie if maybe all these feels complete a myth or shall they bring me to the highest sky In search for wise words to resolve this doubt the things I love about you I do count |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this. When you say goodbye to the past, try to hold on to the fairy kisses. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Zenny: Very good questions, which no one can answer for you but you. "In search for wise words to resolve this doubt, the things I love about you I do count" Wouldn't it be nice to get an answer to lead us through the difficult parts? The answer comes from within, and it usually its takes time (while we're learning). |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't you wish you had instructions? I do, all the time! Good write! |
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