Open Poetry #27 |
Take my Hand (20) |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
take my hand walk with me lets walk into our future leaving past behind and burning the bridges we cross A voice of honesty is treasured more than voices of flattery QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (06-28-2003 03:02 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Definately good.. I really like this one |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As long as you do it together... Very nice, Glenn... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful .... and I think it is wise to be projected into the future, without being haunted by past experiences which limit the intensity of the bond. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice thought |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A fresh start with no way to turn back... Smiling at this one...great job. TD |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good positive thoughts, nicely done! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice and full of faith |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"leaving past behind and burning the bridges we cross" Loved This QjQ Wonderful write...... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
All the bridges burn on that walk....important to take along anything you would want to go back for..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thank you all for replying,, your replies are treasured.. wise man does not need to go back he has all his treasure with him... A voice of honesty |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi, very much enjoyed your poem and your poetry. Thank you for the email...Your suggestions are always welcomed and much appreciated. Lee J. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Good one. I can close my eyes and visualize this poem. Two people walking hand and hand on an old wooden bridge.Up ahead a gentle mist, they smile and look into each others eyes and walk into their destiny with no regrets. Bon-Bon |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent!! ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Very good! Yes, I agreee. If there are troubles in the past, let them remain there and carry on into a bright new future! Warm hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, embracing the now is what's important and special and with your love by your side each moment anything is possible! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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