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Open Poetry #27

Progress

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-28 02:50 PM

I cannot progress,
without the ability
to look myself in the eye.

I say,
down with repression!
But I continue to push
my own hands away.

I scream in
my own head I
express nothing..

I
at least pretend
I enjoy some things,

I might learn to enjoy pretending..

I cannot progress without
the ability
to look myself in the eye.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-28 03:20 PM

terrific write!!!!

enjoyed...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-06-28 04:10 PM

Change a line break
and change
a meaning...

~*~

Change a line
break and change
a meaning

~*~

Well done, Kaoru

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-06-28 04:32 PM

Better not risk to enjoy pretending!

Very powerful write .... and your awareness is the key to progress.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-28 05:12 PM

lovely write, very inspiring

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