Open Poetry #27 |
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Ponderings of a Maple Tree |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Why is it that you pen of me? For I am but a simple tree, I know not of mystic quest, No unseen forces haunt my breast, Although I reach to heavens high, Never shall I touch on sky, Nor dance a dance with Terpsichore; My roots are trenched in earthen floor, Yea, I am but a simple tree, A simple tree, e’er will I be, Alone I stand with outstretched limb, Whorling leaves and fragile stem, Awaiting thrust of woodman’s axe, Of beetle’s bite, north wind’s attacks, With weakened boughs, alone I wait, I wait alone for life’s abate, For nature’s forces, my cruel fate, My final fall, my terminate, Alone I reach unto the sky, Alone I fail, alone shall die, For I am but a simple tree, Why is it that you write of me? [This message has been edited by Tim (06-28-2003 08:33 PM).] |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
wow..i think you truly captured how a tree would feel if it could..hmm or maybe it does...ahem anyways amazing write ![]() |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Awaiting thrust of woodman’s axe, Of beetle’s bite, north wind’s attacks, With weakend boughs, alone I wait, I wait alone for life’s abate, For nature’s forces, my cruel fate, My final fall, my terminate, Alone I reach unto the sky, Alone I fail, soon I will die, For I am but a simple tree, Why is it that you write of me?" This is so sad, but a beautiful.. ![]() |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow, this is a great write! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think your tree's soul is delighted for your tribute ... this is very beautiful. Somehow sad, but it is life's circle and the tree knows. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You ponder what the trees think... and I look at my animals and wonder if they're wondering about the humans... LOL... Always enjoy reading you, Sir... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I have always admired the majestic tree. Her strength, her regal stance, her beauty in silhouette. I do digital photography and have used her for many backgrounds. Lovely write. Bonnie j |
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