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Florida Driveway
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Florida Driveway |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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He wore worn out chuck taylors, and a Led Zeppelin t-shirt with holes in it. I remembered the texture of his hair, the way it bent throughout the surface of my pillow. He had the hands of an artist, he'd rest his head in them while speaking to me of his beliefs, and his veiws of the government. He carved his name in to my arm. The pressure pushed the air out of my lungs, and I felt his lips press against mine.. The music faded and the lights dimmed in my eyes, My scar still read his name as I tried not to cry.. I tried to invision that perfect first impression.. The imprint of your scent left on my clothes. Melted boundries, my seasons have changed. A Florida driveway covered in snow.. Drive-in movies and freezing oceans simply justifying a rosey complexion. I awoke to the realization that rain is merely a compliment to the sun. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write...snow in Florida...yeah |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
great write,,, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good write. The "Florida Driveway" drew me in.  Hugs  Ethel |
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CaseyLeigh Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48 |
nice write...felt very included in this one. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good,enjoyed Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whoa. What was in here that I didn't like? Nuttin' honey! A GREAT read... and I loved the imagery! |
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