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Hollow. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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You hurt me you broke me i fell you've changed me not for the better all i think about is you all i dream about is you i hate you you left me with nothing nothing to console myself with nothing so i'll sit here hollow waiting for you to give me back.... *please keep in mind i wrote this at like 2:00 in the morning hehe so it might not be my best one but hey i wanted to share it anyways  ...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Good write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Don't wait any longer, just take yourself back! The night's torments so well displayed. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the ones at 2 in the morning are the ones that are the best I think |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
What were you doing up at the crack of dawn? LOL good job I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this as a poem. As a way of life, it would be lousy. Now write me one that says, You let me fall, I picked myself up, and I'm glad I found about about you. ... Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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