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Open Poetry #27

I Will Make You Cry.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-28 11:50 PM

i will make you cry
i will show you my heart
bleeding
beating
i will make you cry
with every word i speak
with every breath i take
i will make you cry
i will show you the pain i feel on the inside
i will show you what i hide deep down
i will make you cry
i will show who i love
and i will show how they dont love me back
i will make you cry.

...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you...

[This message has been edited by exhale (06-29-2003 12:31 AM).]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-06-29 12:17 PM

I like this one. It's plaintive and quiet. It leaves me with a definite emotion, a clear picture of unhappiness.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2003-06-29 12:29 PM

exhale,
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"...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you..."
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Is that the goodbye kiss? Serious write...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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