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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-06-28 11:38 AM

Dawn, this precursor to passion’s
primeval push toward dusk, as the
husky voice of anticipation drains
the vocal cords in flames of
night.

Silently, the eyes of want telling of
tender succulence craved, as the
trill of desire echoes the chambers
of coursing blood.

Interrupted by the breath of
lusting urgency, awakened by the
stir of softness beneath the cotton
of cool warmth...dreams flutter
the once still lids of desire’s door
until...

Dusk lies smooth the shadows
as lips taste the vine’s grape
nimbly, lightly into the night
of blackened skies beneath
an opulence of grandeur.

Beneath the silken trace
of tethered lace and
squirms as giggles
fall on the lobe before
a kiss moistens the
heat of night.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2003-06-28 11:49 AM

ooooooo...very pretty scenes you've painted

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-28 12:16 PM

my goodness, this is very soft, very sensual...wonderful!!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-28 02:32 PM

nice write n read ,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-06-28 02:39 PM

Goodness...the first two poems I've read today, just oozes with love.......yours here and Sea's.........

And, oh yeah...this hopelessly in love lady loves them.....

More, please??

Hugs

Ethel

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-06-28 03:02 PM

Wow...you have painted quite a picture with these beautiful words.
Eric

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-06-28 03:25 PM

Very soft piece with wonderful images.

Patricia

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-06-28 04:22 PM

enjoyed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-06-28 05:29 PM

Whew. I think my AC just turned on
when it felt the heat in the room rise.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-06-28 05:55 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I think such beauty can only explain how the dawn and dusk seem to throw off such napalms of necstacy and color! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-28-2003 05:56 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2003-06-28 07:28 PM

Great write...
Last verse was exceptional. TD

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2003-06-28 07:49 PM

Beautifully written Barry....execellent read.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2003-06-29 12:17 PM

Magnus...Wonderful words of love and desire in the the night. Excellent writing, my friend. ***Ivy Rose

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