Open Poetry #27 |
any john lennon fans out there!? |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Hey John... You make it all better Your instant karma Turns my thoughts upside down... I sit and imagine A life.. so much better than this I close my eyes and let it all collide Just sing me... sing me yer blues... tonight soothe this restless soul as I continously hit rewind Hey John... I'm floating down d o w n to Strawberry Fields Forever soaring across the universe soaking wet by standing in the english rain with my eyes closed letting it all collide so... I beg of you sing me yer blues as I continously hit rewind... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-27-2003 07:13 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
"You got to admit, you're getting better, A little better, all the time" loved this one. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Very cool. Keep hitting that rewind. Patricia |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
One more fan here. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed a lot...(smiles) thanks for the memories.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
of course there are...thank you! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
YES! Another Lennon fan here, I was the only "kid" in school that thought that his music was great...way back then, my parents were huge Lennon fans, so we listened to him a lot...You are not alone... Now, I will be humming Lennon tunes all night long! Wonderful write! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah yes Lennon rules even though Mac is a little bit of a tool i love them all |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
VERY good.... and full of memories.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I listen to Lennon's Legends CD at least once a week. "Imagine all the people," I sing this one all the time. "I didn't mean to hurt you, I'm sorry that I made you cry...I'm just a jealous guy" that's another one I've always liked. Yes, guess you could say I'm a John Lennon fan. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hi Good write. My son loves the Beatles and he is a true fan.He has all their albums. When he stops over I'll show him this poem, I'm sure he will enjoy. Bonnie J. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
there is healing in music....and your poetry. enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Bravo! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
excellently expressed , it reminded me of one I wrote way back in 1999 ..... yes his words will live on Hope Imagine I’m A Dreamer Yes tonight I’m singing along Peace he was wanting to see “Imagine” the words of his song Words of a dreamer just like me Tonight he still sang so clear A dreamer but not the only one Words of the song so touching So sad that he’s now gone His words sung out to the world Tonight he’s still singing with me Same thoughts, wishes and dreams To end all hunger and poverty You are gone but never forgotten You fell from the hands of a gun Yes dear John I am a dreamer So you were not the only one Hope |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
ohh wow thanks guys If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-28-2003 02:40 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
"Dear Prudence . . ." xxoo |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Wonderful tribute to a singer who was a true poet.His words are eternal. paladin |
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