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You Learned To Love Women
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You Learned To Love Women |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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You Learned To Love Women what is this magnetism to this creature that from first breath drew you to breast to drink her life whom you leaned strengthening and straightening backbone there to be in time of need and holds you forever tightly in the comfort of acceptance in clutch of fingers as lovers what is this beauty she possesses that could make her shed tears for you ornaments simple edges with tenderness a wisp of hair on thin of skin knowing forever kisses deep in a life that has learned that some days are filled with unequal but every day is filled with the courage of love [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-27-2003 10:31 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Why this is on the second page without a reply I'll never understand this place. As for mine, women are just..i dunno..sigggggghhhhhhhs(nice sighs not my usual soul sick of this sHi..sighs) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen.....All those, and more! Thank you! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write Lady! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
wow. You deleted it. sorry, wish I could have read it first. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i wasnt happy with it so deleted it but put it back ok? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
some days are filled with unequal but every day is filled with the courage of love Incredible write, very much enjoyed...each and every line spoke volumns...thank you for writing and sharing. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
and all i had to do was ask? hmmmmm for future reference and special requests lol |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
but.you know ALL the magic words LOL ROFLMAO |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I love this poem, but what you describe is completely foreign to me. My childhood was brief and not based on love. I think I have managed to understand "mother" as an intellectual abstract unrelated in meaning for me to woman. So, your poem helps me to understand more. Thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yeah cause I'm a real Valentino lol |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i think men learn to love women in all stages of life and bring it back to us in how they love us...h there was another line in the poem but i left it out when posting it the first time.... "a scent in all stages and ages known across the darkness of the night" |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and ice sorry to hear that...yet i find the opposite adulthood has been a lack of it and I found I showered my children with tons of it and now I have some hope……they have learned to love....it being the legacy I give them for women to follow me in their lives |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and r...you are more a sock monkey and i like him much better than Valentino...giggle |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
so much wisdom in these words... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 enjoyed the whole thread |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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