Open Poetry #27 |
Spirit Wind |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Spirit Wind An ill wind and a fine wind blow all about the world. They master the sails and leave freedom’s flags unfurled. One churns up the harvest and riles up the soil, wreaks havoc with the crops and undoes the farmer’s toil. A fine wind brings merriment to a traveler on the bay; it cools down the laborer and gives pleasure to his day. Sometimes an ill wind upturns a ship at sea and lays flat a city whose beauty used to be. We may curse the wind or rejoice in its fling, For if it weren’t for the wind, would the wind chimes sing? ©June 26, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"For if it weren’t for the wind, would the wind chimes sing?" Love THAT line! Great write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS An interesting write, enjoyed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, both of you! Timothy, I was out working in the yard and saw the wind chimes as still as they could be. That line came to me and I couldn't fight it...I had to go in and write it down...next thing I knew, I wrote the poem to lead to it. a part of me wonders if the line would have been enough on its own. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
much enjoyed (I'm the ill Wind?) I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write VAS - enjoyed. Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I think the wind defines my life. I truly enjoyed this one, especially the conclusion. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - wind chimes would still sing in ones heart... Nice write... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Liked the both sides of this... light and airy write. TD |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and what would we call a wind chime? nice |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I love wind chimes!! please make the wind stay! loved your poem! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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