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Faith, Beliefs, Car, Body or Soul
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Faith, Beliefs, Car, Body or Soul |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
So yeah, its ugly, broken mis-shaped coated in scars and in strychnine draped it rattles when pushed and melts in the heat the midle part obviously left incomplete it's dented and poisoned flawed and maligned the edges, admittedly aint so refined but its fine. not so bad and it works and its mine. so back off, leave be and just watch it'll shine. [This message has been edited by Bonfirelight (06-26-2003 09:45 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Faith has seen my body and soul through many a rough time... and I've driven many a car on faith I'll reach my destination... only to decide that faith may move mountains... but cars need mechanics. *S* Enjoyed... welcome to Passions! *S* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
welcome to passions. Good piece |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
not so bad and it works and its mine. so back off, leave be and just watch it'll shine. I like this! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Liked the write...... sounds like my body, my old car and my faith has dwindled like a hundred thousand mile cheap tire that you can run over a dime and read the date on the tread.....but I still 'got soul! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
very much enjoyed how this applies to everything. very clever. looking forward to reading more of you, love gem xxx |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
maybe it's just passion! interesting verse. i like it |
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