Open Poetry #27 |
Beautiful Mystique |
yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
He walks in essence Like the fragile patter of a butterfly wing All of the love of my heart And the lust of my desire for him He permiates through his presence He sends chills Such chills as to only satisfy The heat that burns within me Because of this feeling He enraptures me His very shadow Involves me in life The life within his His life intertwined within mine I see his aura The colors of Pink beauty Red desire Orange fire Blue sorrow Sorrow from the eloquent madness of life Yet the happiness that I feel Whenever I feel he is near me It is enough to make my depression Receed He knows me With his walk His stare His candor All he is is beauty All I feel is life All he exudes is rapture All I feel is delight His beautiful mystique It entrances me He alone wavers the strength in my voice But his essence dares me not to speak It is this mystery of life that Brings tears to my eyes Bright delight and Whets my sensual appetite And with life comes the end And the end I feel is near But with him all pain of torturous waiting Has been completely eradicated Leaving me now more than ever enthralled in his Beautiful mystique yv [This message has been edited by yv (06-25-2003 07:24 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
He knows me Such a simple phrase... but it means everything... when someone knows... and loves what they know. *S* This is beautiful, yv... I really like. *S* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sighs* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
much enjoyed! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh, so beautiful. I feel a bit dreamy. Very soft and lovely verse. Patricia |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Happy is the one..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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