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My Special Girl
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My Special Girl |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
She is more beautiful than any painting. She is more special and precious to me than any heirloom. She is more sexy than any regular woman could possibly be. Just thinking about being near to her, I can feel my heart begin to pound in my chest, beating harder, faster, with more passion than is humanly possible. Yet it does. For my love is so strong for her that my heart can beat as hard as it needs to. There is nothing I wouldn’t do for her. I would cross the most treacherous of terrain. I would climb the most lethal of mountains. I would beg for her. I would take any torture for her. If her life were threatened, I would forfeit my own if it would spare hers. I would do all this and more just to hold her in my arms for one more day. I would do all this and more just for for one more kiss. She is my proof that a heaven must exist. I could not ask for more than the love she has given me Every prayer I have made for love has been answered Every dream I have made for a love and a lover I could spend my life with has come true Now all I can do is wait for her return. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
*I think im going to cry....* good write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is no such thing as a regular woman!  Very nice what you wrote for your special lady. *Welcome* pisumnux~ |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
wow you sound like i was with my ex. I know those feelings and i know they come from deep within the heart. Excellent job. |
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joyfull girl Junior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 15 |
well done it is nice to see a poem about love that isn't over the top and deals with real feelings beautiful |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
Like the title says, she's my special girl. I just hope she knows how truly special she is to me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good! liked it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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