Open Poetry #27 |
Darkness |
Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Darkness Trapped in an Abyss Take my hand don't let me fade Into this Darkness |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amature2~ Oh ... this is very good~ A well-worked format~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
reminds me of my Short Moods poems. Enjoyed this...request in poetry form. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
i hear you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very powerful! Don't fade! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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