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Open Poetry #27

Darkness

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-06-11 11:40 AM

Darkness

Trapped in an Abyss
Take my hand don't let me fade
Into this Darkness

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-06-11 01:09 PM

Amature2~
Oh ... this is very good~
A well-worked format~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2003-06-11 08:29 PM

reminds me of my Short Moods poems.

Enjoyed this...request in poetry form.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2003-06-14 04:25 AM

i hear you

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-01 05:21 PM

Very powerful!

Don't fade!

lol

ARCTIC WIND

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