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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2003-06-25 03:20 PM

Summer Shivers

Small slivers of
life thoughts,
wondering,

who is hungrier,
more wanting,
of life giving juices
and slowly rubbed
emotions…

believing, I am,
that it is me,
drought laden,
a desert in search
of an oasis...

coming upon you
in lazy gazed loco
motion promises
mired deep in
tie-dyed gray thoughts
and lashed looks

would you reach,
then,
toward me,
gripping promises
still to be given,
grappling,
rappelling,
as husk of voice
shells you
in promise of
flavors buttering
your summer haze?

Come, feast with me,
our snow cones are
melting.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-06-25 03:22 PM

Sort of mysterious....

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-06-25 03:24 PM

Deca Girl!! So good to see you here!
"coming upon you
in lazy gazed loco
motion promises
mired deep in
tie-dyed gray thoughts
and lashed looks

would you reach,
then,
toward me,
gripping promises
still to be given,
grappling,
rappelling,
as husk of voice
shells you
in promise of
flavors buttering
your summer haze?"

Oooh yes...you sizzle in the summer girl.
..and no one wants to see their snow cones melt, huh?

Love this...
More please...and, soon?
~Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-06-25 05:23 PM

Deca, you just melted my snowcone...thanx!

Excellent write...loved it..

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-06-25 08:52 PM

believing, I am,
that it is me,
drought laden,
a desert in search
of an oasis...

coming upon you
in lazy gazed loco
motion promises
mired deep in
tie-dyed gray thoughts
and lashed looks

would you reach,
then,
toward me,
gripping promises
still to be given,
grappling,
rappelling,
as husk of voice
shells you
in promise of
flavors buttering
your summer haze?
==========================

good grief and humidity LOL
puddles...you are turning this place into puddles... steamy stuff Deca-girl...
but then you are the flame

All I can feel is this distance between you and me.
I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me
because touching is believing.

c.j.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2009-03-24 06:14 PM

Good Write ~ I agree with everyone else!

ARCTIC WIND

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