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Shadows of Time
Junior Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-06-24 06:28 PM

The slowing breaths you took
The panic and overwhelming distraught subsided
As I held you close
Your intoxicating fragrance filled my lungs
The warmth you radiated
I rocked your body slowly, comforting you
Trying to ease the trembling you were experiencing
Nothing was said, nothing was heard
Save for the gasps between your tears
The trickling flow soaked my shoulder as you rested you head
The darkness embraced us
As I embraced you
And held you close

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-06-24 06:35 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A very lovely yet sad entrance piece here.
I know you will enjoy your stay with us..
take your time, have a look around..
read and reply to others..
and most of all, have fun!

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-06-24 06:37 PM

Enthralling sensations! Yours is a shoulder that would indeed comfort a damsel in distress!

Welcome to Passions! You are off to a great start with this wonderful write!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

David Carrson
Junior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 25
Carrickfergus N. Ireland

3 posted 2003-06-24 06:46 PM

very descriptive I see the couple clearly. Welcome and enjoy from one newbie to another.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2003-06-24 06:55 PM

Very nice. Great first post. I will be looking for more from you.

Welcome to Passions!

Patricia

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-06-24 07:16 PM

Oh, welcome to Passions! Not everyone knows how to stand the line of here and now, but I have a feeling, you do. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-06-24 07:24 PM

Reminds me of a time~~

Thank you
M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-06-24 07:39 PM

absolutely beautiful..stunning poem...welcome

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-06-25 10:47 AM

I think this needs another time around.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-06-25 12:44 PM

Welcome Welcome!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-06-25 01:39 PM

There is much warmth of heart radiating from this post. Thank you for sharing.

WELCOME to Passions!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-06-25 04:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

Shadows of Time
Junior Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 14

12 posted 2003-06-25 08:54 PM

Thank you all for your support and kind words....

*sigh*

This however is not a ficticous moment, but one I can not forget, as it is etched into my mind forever. One of the few nights with the one I love. One of the few nights I may never have again.

Thank you all...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2009-03-24 06:15 PM

WELCOME TO PIP, I know I am a little late lol 6 years later

ARCTIC WIND

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