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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-06-25 10:46 AM

So Wednesday wept
In an emotional hangover of
mid-week what next mania
that left my eyes irritated
and my nose sore
from having it rubbed
again.

The day used to be a marker
Half way
And now it just sparks
An emotional flat line
Of here we go

Again?

I’d wipe those tears
From Wednesday’s cheek
If my heart could reach
Far enough….
Or close enough…
And grasp the hold
Of sliding minutes
Or a hand
But the tissues are over there
And I’m here
Too far
Too close to the edge
Of another Thursday

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-06-25 10:48 AM

I'm reminded of something that
little girls use to receive
on their birthdays...but I digress...

So...

I guess it's up to me to ask
you to ready one for tomorrow, because
you've started another string of thinkers,
I'm sure...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-06-25 10:51 AM

The day used to be a marker
Half way
And now it just sparks
An emotional flat line
Of here we go

Again?

I’d wipe those tears
From Wednesday’s cheek
If my heart could reach
Far enough….
===============================

I woke up with a whole lotta Wednesday woe..
you been reading my mind?

And now it just sparks
An emotional flat line
Of here we go

WHOA......................

All I can feel is this distance between you and me.
I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me
because touching is believing.

c.j.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-06-25 11:07 AM

Ron...what to say? Will you do every day of the week, like the panties? lol...oops..

I do so love reading you...

Susan

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-06-25 11:15 AM

..."and grasp the hold of sliding minutes"--I enjoy your uniquely expressive writing!

Warm hugs,
See you tomorrow!

EA

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2003-06-25 11:17 AM

This makes me wish there were more than seven days in a week. Lovely writing sir.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-06-25 11:37 AM

Wonderful...enjoying these Captain...
..and I have soft shoulders if you need to have a good cry.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-06-25 11:57 AM

Oh, do I know this state of mind as I am a Wednesday's child. What will Thursday bring? I await tomorrow impatiently for your words.

Patricia

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2003-06-25 12:15 PM

I’d wipe those tears
From Wednesday’s cheek
If my heart could reach
Far enough….
Or close enough…
And grasp the hold
Of sliding minutes
Or a hand

I know these words... though I'd never read them... Now... they're going into my library so I can read them again and again. *S*

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-06-25 12:43 PM

yep...here we go again

love the wording

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-06-25 01:04 PM

well, (laughing), between then and now, or here and there, I'll be kind and wipe that cheek for ya if you can't reachit...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2003-06-25 01:24 PM

Ron

But the tissues are over there
And I’m here
Too far
Too close to the edge
Of another Thursday

I feel the low in this poem, but I'm not sure if it is yours or someone elses...in either case...

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

12 posted 2003-06-25 03:23 PM

If my heart could reach
Far enough….
Or close enough…
And grasp the hold
Of sliding minutes
Or a hand

***

Sometimes
certain lines
linger

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2009-03-24 04:11 PM

Again?..............." ~ again *sigh*

Enjoyed the write C

ARCTIC WIND

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