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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-06-24 09:29 AM



I am not the first
I thought
to drink from the
well of life
and gain
nothing

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-06-24 09:34 AM


WOW!!  Short, to the point, and hard hitting.
Good stuff!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-06-24 09:56 AM


Excellent Jason ! Not blocked right now I see...lol.  Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-06-24 10:58 AM


No, most definitely not!--however, the more you drink of life, the sweeter the nectar!

Drink on!
Warm hugs
EA

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
4 posted 2003-06-24 12:58 PM


Jason:

this is awesommmmeeeee!

Well not the message but the write
Excellent job Jason
I love this!
xxoo

brian sites
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usa
5 posted 2003-06-24 02:51 PM


but you gained THIS insight
right?

drink some more...

nice write

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-24 02:52 PM


and you will not be the last
LeeJ
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7 posted 2003-06-24 02:54 PM


this one really hit home plate...good write, thanks so much.
Gina Culliney
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8 posted 2003-06-25 03:22 PM


Such candor in these lil teasers!
Wind
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9 posted 2003-06-25 03:24 PM


different than the title depicted. Smart, and true.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2009-03-24 04:12 PM


this is good, short, but meaningful!
~Wonderful Write


ARCTIC WIND

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