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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-06-24 09:50 PM



Tower

since I fell
told ‘er
get the ‘dore
bell wring ing
br ass buck le’ t no win
din ner now!

she push  eiffel

© Copyright 2003 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-06-24 10:43 PM


lol.....hiya Walt!! Nice to read your words once again. hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

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2 posted 2003-06-25 12:37 PM


Waltie? love the word play, and the image of pushing a thing already leaning?

What can I say?

YOU RULE, WALT.



missed ya bud.

Larry C
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3 posted 2003-06-25 12:46 PM


WOW,
Wi she could tea chus to dot hat! Cool. Two in one night!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

brian sites
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4 posted 2003-06-25 01:50 AM


letters falling from your splayed fingers
they make the cents
that I need
yup

cool as use she'll
push
it
up

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-25 03:53 AM


busting out laughing
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6 posted 2003-06-25 09:29 AM


Who says it has to mean anything.

paladin

....a knight without armor

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2003-06-25 09:33 AM


Dug your off-kilter humor!

Love & Laughter,
EA

cruz
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8 posted 2003-10-11 02:00 AM


i can't believe i almost missed this one.  cleverly beary!
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