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Emotion - A Night's Familiar Routine
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Emotion - A Night's Familiar Routine |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA 
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Sitting. Alone in the glimmers of squandering light, Gazing aimlessly into the fallen darkness. Drifting. Freeing the grasp of attention, Embarking on the journey of a whim. Reflecting. Walking through the whispers of my thoughts, Pondering the embrace of love and heart. Dreaming. Heeding sounds of mirth, Searching for blowing wisps of adoration. Longing. Capturing a moment of presence, Clutching to the reality of dreams. Knowing. Surrendering sweetly to a land of slumber, Assured that you are mine. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS NICK! Wonderful entrance post here! I look forward to seeing more of your fine work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done and welcome |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
welcome aboard..or is that to the board? anyway..lol nice post... look forward to reading more. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
welcome to passions. i too am looking forward to reading more from you.. enjoyed this read. love gem xx |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Nick - welcome to Passions and as my last name is Tofte I am intrigued by your pen name - loved your poem - hope you share lots more of them - Paul |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed Your First Post!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful debut, dearest friend, I know this gorgeous magical feeling too in my dreams and dream of the day I can hug my girl close lovingly and share the stars with her, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Nick, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nick, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words and welcomes. It seems much an eternity that I have searched for a place to share thoughts, feelings and dreams through words simply to no avail... until now. This community of dreamers is something that you really wouldn't appreciate unless you have searched elsewhere. I look forward sharing words with you all and hearing your personal stories as well. -  -Thank your for the e-card. It was very sweet of you!  Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." [This message has been edited by NickTofteland (06-13-2003 09:46 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 loved this! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Nick: Welcome to PIP! How very sweet this is and what a lovely write . . . to drift off to sleep with such precious thoughts . . . xxoo |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Welcome to Passions! A very well expressed piece. Thank you for sharing. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
welcome to pip,,, nice write... QjQ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Nick...What an entrance onto the Passions poetry site!!! Wonderful poem. I look forward to reading more of your work. ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very much enjoyed the softness of this poem. Welcome to Passions.. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
beautiful poem!~ i am looking forward to reading more of your work! what a talent you possess. welcome to pip! Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My word! You certainly made a fine debut with this lovely poem!  Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
Such welcoming arms you all have extended... thank you all for the kinds words and welcomes. I think I'll stick around a while |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
I have been absent for some time now *bows in shame* but wanted to let you all know that this poem won me the editor's choice award at poetry.com along with a cash prize. Thanks to all for your constructive criticisms! Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nick, welcome back. Please take a moment to review this thread /pip/Forum3/HTML/000230.html and if you do a search under "Discussion" for poetry.com, you'll find 31 other discussions. Please, check into everything very carefully, m'friend. |
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