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His Eyes Were Mine
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His Eyes Were Mine |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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As a philosopher, nuptial spring draws passionate maps Elected approaches to poetry closely in theoretical wraps Capturing scope and fire of an ancient Victorian verse Renders poetic insight, unearthing evocative firsts Petrifying everlasting gloving waters of Elsa From a source launched ambient graced genius Power lighted myriad eyes containing a path Pouring beauty in our face, inheriting effervescent flesh Virtue shines throughout, in a form rare and dense Bearing colors in expressions, harmoniously there My gaze immediately bursts into bloom Having drunk from this sun which articulously swoons Two souls pray worthy inside a deep open sea From hence my center binds in a place called we Do I dare sovereign this depth of positive element? Integrity’s good choice resolves conversing with sense Seemingly more likely precise, pronouncing thoughts to flower Beginning to tremble on the verge of unimaginable poetic travel Dancing amid hours of love’s passionate beginning kisses Unplanned mystical sphere, gyrates within the touch of his lips When your arms wrap around me with such unfathomable languor Elysium entangles my space within your silent flaming words savored Altering passages sentimental from waves of heightening thought My heart hallucinating insidious spells, in this extremely poignant world Wherein the imagery of twilight dreams essential to our being Hearing white sound speak heavy with fascination freeing He whispers to me of beauty growing pearls among our dreams Softened cellos play a sensual music, towards rhythmus teams He holds my imagination to being, a finer consciousness of life Remarkable symbols, rise eternal, describing poignant voice Flames of the stars grow fragrant volumes of verse Where our hearts still within helplessness, sweetly immersed His love for a little while, marked my life into eternity...forever my love, forever |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am in awe..speechless at the profound beauty of this piece. *Smiling a very positive smile here*  ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy Lee~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is worth a big, I mean, BIG applause.   ARCTIC WIND |
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