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whimsical poetics (repost) |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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The words dance around my window waiting to come in I wait and ponder but a moment as they twist and spin Like a poetic kaleidoscope their patterns couplets and feet change before my eyes Then to my surprise my resting pen springs to life How did the words sneak past my defense when I am fully awake Or in my enchantment did I the window break Like a rainbow the words text flow from window to pen to blank paper below forming creating with each and every stroke melodic verse That I alone could have never wrote. Then they left as swiftly as they came the words spinning above my head stopping a moment at the window sill as to say adieu then floating on the passing night breeze as the sun brings the morning new looking down to paper in my hand I see a poem looking this way and that sign my name smile though I know it a lie and hope my new found muses will bless me yet again until my name is Frost or someday I am rich. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...here's to hoping you realize all of your ambitions, Brad... this made me smile... and say, "Thanks!" |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling from ear to ear* love this...this is just what I needed today....my muse has been so dark and moody of late...I think I need to sit by your window for a while...I like your outlook  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You just never know Brad...ya never know. Loved the write...well done! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Brad, your muses are delightfully whimsical--and capricious!  Happy hugs to you and your entourage! EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful poetry Dan...thank you for sharing... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi, had to come back and look at your picture again...you look much like someone I knew a long time ago...he played in a band...from New Jersey...they sang a lot of Journey's songs....what a writer he was...a good friend...last I heard he was married...but that was a long time ago...anyway..now you know you have a twin...hehehhehe. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Brad, I like this. It is cute the way those rascals of words and lines, feet and all seem to do as they may....I think that has happened to me a few times too. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Muse! ARCTIC WIND |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thanks |
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