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“Candy Gleam”
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“Candy Gleam” |
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Second Self Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 15 |
“Candy Gleam” A new quirk and phrase and stumbled upon word that lightens by surprise, This unicity sprouts and spirals upward in florescence to fly, Rests on my shoulder and accompanies like music, These thoughts of you. Life’s wonder like vivid embers branching to fade like vespertine glitter, Or flaws of others colored over in gentle hues of voice and splendor, Your portrait lends rapture to a spirit now in trial, These thoughts of you. From orbiting smiles melodically suspended swirling to tire caught eyes, To first scenes of fallen cotton, those decorating white butterflies, Toward pine needles, gifts, and tinsel surreal, These thoughts of you. Yet in prologue with acts unwritten, holds promise to a sequitur so beautiful, This remembrance and preface gives pride to a guardian in shadow, A keepsake, scribble, and your precious picture, Brings thoughts of you - dear little Sister. "www.miserymadebeautiful.com" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You MUST! Absolutely MUST, read this for her. And keep it for her, because it will change over the years, as she does. Damned good! |
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Second Self Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 15 |
Hey Thanks Wranx... Glad you liked it...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! just perfect! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
These thoughts of you... wonderful writing M |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a keepsake scribble |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoyed your sentiments, verbiage, imagery, and your beautiful soul that you so lovingly poured into this poem for your sister. You are both blessed! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful Write Indeed! ~I'm a little too late on the commenting, but you should ARCTIC WIND |
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Kenwood1234 New Member
since 2011-09-25
Posts 2 |
I should of read it to her. I'm sorry Jackie. I love you always. Mikey |
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