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Veil Lifted
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Veil Lifted |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Veil lifted I see torment fly to its death. How beautiful its end more pleasure than stars. Sleeping in numbers counting the clouds never suited me. Though it waves proposing return striking a deal with future. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
liked the read nice poem hey if you want we can become freinds well upto you of course my poems are in here somewhere lol just got to look lol thanks for the nice read anyway RedStoneEB my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
A beautiful dream this. I hope you've achieved it gem |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
more pleasure than stars... liked this |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sleeping in numbers counting the clouds never suited me. (smiling)... sleeping in numbers... an interesting phrase that reminded me of a dream I once had... and sleeping in numbers, while strange, was not so bad in my dream... enjoyed this Gem... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
grinning at rons reply. thankyou all, for replying, each one means a lot. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gemma - liking this side of you so inspiring - and keep those eyes wide open missy please you do deserve this "dream" xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I see torment fly to its death. How beautiful its end more pleasure than stars. I reaLLY love these lines! Maree  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another awesome write~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting Write! Very Descriptive ARCTIC WIND |
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